Looking for constructive criticism...

[Moraine]

I'm sort of looking for constructive criticism for these two. When I have time, I'll type up full profiles for them, too.

Name: Moraine

Concept: loosely based on her former personality and on being a practicing Doctor
Facet: Venom-born

Cosmetic Basics

Size: Average/Large; 4' at the shoulder, 12' nose tip to tail tip
Body Type: Default body
Ear Type: Default ear; inside shading to grey
Skin Type: Default skin
Body Color/Pattern: White
Underbelly Color/Pattern: Shades to a soft grey
Eye Type/Color: Default eyes; slitted pupil that dilates or contracts easily, light grey iris
Extra Accent Colors: Dark, charcoal grey claws, toe pads, and inner flesh
Ornaments: Fluff Ornament: small tufts of fur in iridescent purples and blues, stiff and sometimes glittery where tiny mirajin crystals have begun to form. Tufts on her eartips, elbows, and heels. Has a mane running from the base of her skull between her ears down her back and down her tail, though it ends a foot or so before the tail does. Also has a series of solid grey, matte flexible hide –growths?- , not too large, one on the back of each ears, on her shoulders, top of skull down her nose, back of forepaws/hands/ hind feet, and over the front of her thighs/knees, as well as two strips of it framing her made starting on her neck behind her ears ending midway down her tail. (I have pictures, I just need a computer with a scanner.)

Mutations

Gene Mods: None
Venom Mods: Tranquilizing toxin

Tongue Mutation: Default; charcoal grey with three claws, prehensile
Spine Mutation: See notes beneath Ornaments

Extra Mutation 1: Hands
Extra Mutation 2: Absorbing Flesh
Extra Mutation 3: Container


Name: Ros Cyrin

Concept: Symbiosis
Facet: Third Eye; color varies
Facet Power: Meld; a physical joining as well as the non-physical one, and weak telepathy

Cosmetic Basics

Size: Small; 6” long
Body Type: Serpentine
Ear Type: Multi Ear
Skin Type: Canvas
Body Color/Pattern: Variable
Underbelly Color/Pattern: Variable
Eye Type/Color: Four Eyes; variable
Extra Accent Color: Variable
Ornaments: None

Mutations

Gene Mods: Pygmy
Venom Mods: Numbing

Tongue Mutation: Default
Spine Mutation: Smooth

Extra Mutation 1: Skin melds itself against a surface, gripping it and forming itself against it
Extra Mutation 2: Extra limbs
Extra Mutation 3: Hands

[Alzirr]

Hmm! I'd really love to see the pictures, especially of Moraine. :3 Interesting designs you have there! Keep it up!

[Ymber]

Both designs are very nice! Though the second one is rather quick - but that's alright. :D I'd love to see pictures too. It's hard to picture Moraine's growths.

[Moraine]

Thanks for your feedback; I'll look into your suggestions. :)